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  • Mood: Distracted
Pretentious words and empty threats,
hit the ground as hard as autumn leaves.
Scattered by the breeze,
of all immortal sin, of kin.
We're so far away from the tree.
Withered. Lost, inside.
So don't pretend you're better.

Season pass while we refrain,
unlike like life, stuck in our stagnant ways.
A canvas made of green,
is littered on the ground, abound.
Shows only what we want to see.
We're the same, in name,
except for when its autumn.

Every time I look at you,
all I see, is an empty being.
There's no hiding.

Seek the morning sun,
with eyes, unclouded.
Reach the dusk of dawn,
its not, that far way

Why do you cry, at the same things?
There is nothing, left for us here.

copyright Lucas G. Moreno (been to lazy to put the c thing and the date and all that jazz lately)
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Interviewer:Im confused on the game The Legend of Zelda:Twilight Princess, i thought Link was supposed to love Zelda but im hearing different storys about Ilia and Midna can you explain?

Miyamoto:Ahh yes in this game we decided it would not be Zelda who Link is smiten with as it is obvious in nearly each game that he has fallen for her, of course there were a few she wasn’t in. no we decided to make it a little more difficult to figure out because this is half the fun of the games.

Interview:I see so its not Zelda......well who is it then? Midna or Ilia?

Miyamoto:As to that its kind of both.

Interviewer: Both?

Miyamoto:This may be confusing but notice how Links village is small and they need to populate to keep it ruuning. Well as you probably know Links is predicted to become mayor the only female his age is Ilia and shes the mayors daughter........well who do you think Link planned to have kids with? Everyone expected it including Link himself. then he met Midna of course he didnt like her off the bat quite the oppposite he didnt like being with her much toward the begining. By the time they were travelling to get the last fused shadow Link thought of her as a friend nothing more. Now here comes Zant he offers Midna a choice however she refuses and she cares for Link while hes hurt and when she is hurt by the light spirit Link saves her. Her additude toward Link changes dramaticly around the time they were in the temple of time is when Link fell in love. However remember that both Ilia and Midna loved Link

Interviewer:Hmmmm what about Lanayrus story? He thought alot about Ilia then.

Miyamoto:You must remember that he still expected himself to be wed with her and she was his best friend never-less so of course he thought of her.

Interviewer: Do you plan on bringing Midna back?

Miyamoto:The original plan was to make this the only game of this type i may have continued if the GameCube had stayed longer. However there are many people begging to see Midna come back and this is the only way so i may do it after all.


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  • Mood: Distracted
  • Listening to: Seer by About Tess
  • Reading: math problems
  • Watching: myself lose to a microwave
  • Eating: pizza
  • Drinking: cherry coke
What are you doing to yourself?
Get up, get up, get out
Woken, open, found
Learning still, to unbound.
You know what’s coming
It’ll hurt worse
Awake from the burn
Future solace awaits

They saw right through you
They don’t even know you exist,
But they never had to
They saved your life
Gave you a second chance
Don’t throw it away, it’s good advice
Even if you don’t do it now
It’s not hard to scry
Feel the waves in your ears
Let it reach your soul
You can hear it better than anyone
It’s in the harmony of the planets
Not surprising, you’d be reached this way

Time to let it go
Finally sever the line
Feel free to watch or wave goodbye
You knew this moment was coming
Only when it came

It’s rippling you away
It’s crippling the flame
It’s blasting soft waves
It’s leering disdain
It’s shredding a craze
It’s soaring in name
It’s tuning your phase
It’s beckoning reclaim
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Notes:
Last 8 lines feel solid, rest is janky
Clean up*
*the music should do the rest (maybe)
There was once a little sprite. He was, and forever will be without a name. As few may know, all things with an origin -a beginning, have an end. This sprite has no origin, or at least not one that is known. One thing about sprites that most will find notable is that they have no shadow, and only shine an illuminative light. Often times they are even depicted as fairies, ghosts, or associated with the paranormal, the mythical or the magical. This sprite however, for the longest, knew only one thing. This thing he knew so well, and loved so dearly was contrary to his existence. He wanted so desperately to be in its presence, to be with Her, yet to no avail. Wherever he would tread, is wherever she would not be. As for where it was he was going was not for him to ever know. He was senseless for senses would only make him dull. He was selfless, for selfishness is only an attribute of the weak, and he was all powerful. He chose no sides, because there are no sides. The only thing he was ever sure of was himself, for he had known no one else. He dreamed she was real, but his logic contradicted his dreams and he thought that maybe she was just an illusion, all but real. He thought, and thought, thinking 'I would give all I know to know this one thing.' His wish was never granted. But his dreams were never wrong. This he did not know.

Little by little, existence began to change. Beings would appear as if sent, simply to turn a motionless verse, into a thriving pulse. Soon, the sprite was not the only one moving, and not the only thing that cast only light without shadow. These beings would exist, and stop existing as quickly as they came into being. Existence for the sprite however was the same as ever. He could not communicate with these beings, and as change presented itself, he would simply wander around and observe.

When Factor met Zenith, they created the endoverse and the exoverse together, with and without all expectations. They were open and free. The sprite did not think so, for he thought existence itself is a jail. One you cannot chase, nor run from. At this time, the sprite was bias through his own experiences in 'existence', but he had existed long before Factor and Zenith, and knew they too would eventually parish and therefore leave him. He calculated that since he himself is the only one he had known the longest, that he by principle was the wisest. Regardless however, he had yet to know, that he did not know all, and never will. Once and only once, had he ever communicated with others. These others were none other than Factor and Zenith. Inheritably, Factor and Zenith were never meant to exist forever. They came into being, and from whence they came they would go. For this to happen, the circumstances had to be right. Since time is of no concept here, eventually, they would undoubtedly die. Because they could understand each other, the sprite being very wise took it upon himself to teach them many things and he had many things, from which they could learn. By irregular calculation the sprite had figured, they were the only ones that had come into existence that he could communicate with.

The sprite taught them many things, but when they learned that eventually they would no longer exist, they were not satisfied with the idea that they would be leaving at any given point in time without notice. Busy creating and otherwise continuing the universe from before its start, it was not often that Factor, Zenith or the sprite would communicate, or even meet together at the same time. After just finishing a particularly peculiar planet, Zenith decided he would take a break and speak to the sprite who simply roamed around learning things or chasing Her, whenever he saw Her. With the progression of the universe, he saw Her around less often. Zenith troubled by thoughts eventually found the sprite. The sprite turning from his distractions focused his attention on Zenith. Zenith wanted to know if there was a way to change things that were already set in motion. Sprite with all his wisdom had never known such a thing to occur, and told him that the courses of things are better left alone. Still, it intrigued the sprite that he considered it worthy of investigation.

The sprite sought things that had motion in order to procure information. As the universe progressed, it was more common to find things in motion than what he had previously known before it's development. The first thing he sought was a sphere of fire that moved about in a graceful motion as it followed a course. With his might, he managed to stop it, but did not fully stop it, and with its remaining momentum, it continued its course. Though the sprite could have very easily have stopped it all the way, he considered his attempt a failure. He had gathered that once things went out of existence, he had never known them to come back into existence. If his attempt to stop something only slowed it down, then it was certain that the process would only be slightly interrupted, and that there would be consequences for disrupting an already seemingly set balance. He tried this test a few more times before attempting more complexly created structures. After obtaining absolute motionlessness, he concluded that it could be done, but that if it were to be done, it might not be an undoable thing. If so, this would surely result in an incorrectable error of existence, which is something he considered himself at times. After forcefully retaining the explosion of a neutron star proved difficult to maintain, he also realized it might take precise timing and anything less of perfect would mean a no longer reachable window, or perhaps even a future malfunction with how things came in and out of existence. After much 'time' his curiosity and knowingness had been satisfied and he waited for Zenith. Since Zenith had brought it up, he felt it fair to let Zenith know what he had found.

Upon waiting, and doing his normal routine of discovery, he had a dream he considered inordinary. He always thought dreams a bizarre spectacle since they never seemed to be logical, yet always insightful and where he learned the most from. In this dream, something came to him that he was not familiar. A 'name' appeared to him, and this name was Zenith. He felt in his being what the purpose of this was, but he did not know how to describe it. A time later, another name came to him, the name was Factor. This dream however gave him a rather grave feeling. Shortly after awaking from this dream, Factor who he had not seen since the last time the three of them were together was heading in his direction closing the distance between them. The recent dream made the sprite uneasy. Although the balance of entering and exiting entities had occurred so many times before, the sprite felt that there was something different about it this time. In this he told Factor, "__________" and Factors name was given to him. Factor was content, and felt bestowed. The sprite asked Factor to stay, so that he may be present when Zenith received a name as well. They ventured. They discovered. They spoke. They waited. They dreamed.

One last dream took place before Zenith came. This dream, to the sprite felt quite existing, as another name came to him. But there was no one else for the name to be given to. Suddenly, in a moment of supreme clarity, he realized, that this name, was for himself, and that these names, are not symbols, nor emblems, but rather, they are keys that will unlock doors that had yet to reveal themselves. It was the shortest dream he experienced, and in the midst of his dreaming Zenith finally arrived. When the sprite awoke, he was very happy to be reunited with the both of them, a rare thing that only lasted so long. Immediately, the sprite proceeded to tell Zenith his name. Zenith too was quite honored like Factor was, and found this to be an interesting addition. The sprite unable to hold his excitement, a thing that was otherwise nonexistent without the existence of time, told them he too received a name and it was "__________" Factor having paid very close attention since he had come into ’existence’ asked what the purpose of these were, since everything that had been created thus far had a reason for having come into being. The sprite told them about his experiments, and his findings, and what came to him in his dreams. He told them that he would like them to stay together for a little while longer. That he felt the window for them to go would be coming soon, and that this time may be different. So together they contemplated, and they waited for a time, that they too soon felt was coming.

Unfortunately, Factor and Zenith had other thoughts about this. They had been born together, and they knew that the time coming meant almost certain death. They started to contemplate, privately, secretly. The Sprite although wise, could have never predicted what was about to happen, for it was never meant that he know. The next time he awoke from his dream, he was no longer himself. He was empty, hollow, a shell. He became a fragile existence. He could not for the longest time configure what happened to himself, and with sadness, he thought that Factor and Zenith met with the inevitable.

Finally after much dwelling, he realized what had happened. Factor and Zenith somehow managed to steal his name, his key. He could not know it, he could not speak it, it had gone from him, and he only knew that it has happened. Since this sprite was one of a kind, his key too was also one of a kind while both Factor and Zenith's keys were similar. He could not figure out why, or how, but all he knew was that he would have to somehow find Factor and Zenith and retrieve his name. When granted their names, they became more powerful. So powerful that they were capable of doing things without the consequence of physics, not breaking the laws and order of things, but bending them so irrevocably that the laws themselves could by this be changed even if only temporarily. However, once linked to their name, they must be attached or suffer the consequences of being fragile. With their name, they are all, without it, they are naught.

The sprite was and is no more naive than they who stole his name, but the sprites trial and error had never before taken place in a social setting. Using his name, Factor and Zenith permanently shut the window to death of their kind. In fear that the sprite would not approve of this, they sealed him with the constructs of the endoverse, as nothing more than a presence. The sprite, used to the idea of confinement, did not mind this cage. However in order to set what he knew as the order of things and their place back, he had to obtain freedom. His only way of obtaining freedom now relies on the endoverse’s source of amplifying power, merging with a soul.
  • Mood: Distracted
Pretentious words and empty threats,
hit the ground as hard as autumn leaves.
Scattered by the breeze,
of all immortal sin, of kin.
We're so far away from the tree.
Withered. Lost, inside.
So don't pretend you're better.

Season pass while we refrain,
unlike like life, stuck in our stagnant ways.
A canvas made of green,
is littered on the ground, abound.
Shows only what we want to see.
We're the same, in name,
except for when its autumn.

Every time I look at you,
all I see, is an empty being.
There's no hiding.

Seek the morning sun,
with eyes, unclouded.
Reach the dusk of dawn,
its not, that far way

Why do you cry, at the same things?
There is nothing, left for us here.

copyright Lucas G. Moreno (been to lazy to put the c thing and the date and all that jazz lately)
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Interviewer:Im confused on the game The Legend of Zelda:Twilight Princess, i thought Link was supposed to love Zelda but im hearing different storys about Ilia and Midna can you explain?

Miyamoto:Ahh yes in this game we decided it would not be Zelda who Link is smiten with as it is obvious in nearly each game that he has fallen for her, of course there were a few she wasn’t in. no we decided to make it a little more difficult to figure out because this is half the fun of the games.

Interview:I see so its not Zelda......well who is it then? Midna or Ilia?

Miyamoto:As to that its kind of both.

Interviewer: Both?

Miyamoto:This may be confusing but notice how Links village is small and they need to populate to keep it ruuning. Well as you probably know Links is predicted to become mayor the only female his age is Ilia and shes the mayors daughter........well who do you think Link planned to have kids with? Everyone expected it including Link himself. then he met Midna of course he didnt like her off the bat quite the oppposite he didnt like being with her much toward the begining. By the time they were travelling to get the last fused shadow Link thought of her as a friend nothing more. Now here comes Zant he offers Midna a choice however she refuses and she cares for Link while hes hurt and when she is hurt by the light spirit Link saves her. Her additude toward Link changes dramaticly around the time they were in the temple of time is when Link fell in love. However remember that both Ilia and Midna loved Link

Interviewer:Hmmmm what about Lanayrus story? He thought alot about Ilia then.

Miyamoto:You must remember that he still expected himself to be wed with her and she was his best friend never-less so of course he thought of her.

Interviewer: Do you plan on bringing Midna back?

Miyamoto:The original plan was to make this the only game of this type i may have continued if the GameCube had stayed longer. However there are many people begging to see Midna come back and this is the only way so i may do it after all.


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Kuro Kiatsu Kiotori
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Current Residence: The Northern Walk
Favourite genre of music: Anything that has a style and at least some class.
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Favourite style of art: Hand drawings
Wallpaper of choice: Seasonscape
Favourite cartoon character: Tails Miles Prower
Personal Quote: "What then, when there is not reason to reason with?" ~Rhythan
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TimberSlashWolf Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the fave. :)
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Saskelover1234 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2014  Student Writer
Tu me manques et Je t'aime, ne jamais oublier que.
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courglas Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014
As I once learned how to say long ago.. ich liebe dich mehr
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Saskelover1234 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014  Student Writer
Personne n'a jamais pu vous aimer plus que moi. Je promets. 
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courglas Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014

Personne n'a jamais pu vous aimer plus que moi. Je promets. <- this + How much I love you = Total amount (x)

X is how much I love you. You may solve for X.

(How much you love me) + How much I love you = X

That aside, there's alot I could say about that. In truth, as much as we both like to verbally express how much we care about and for each other, there is really only so much either of us can do for each other. I have dark parts of myself I have yet to reconcile with. Until it dies, I cannot sleep. Until it burns, I am not free. Until I repent, my sins run in my veins deep. There are things about me I don't trust you to accept, or understand, or even know. It isn't even that you don't deserve to know, but rather, for someone who will likely not end up being the one I take my vows with, its not your place to take on that kind of burden. My partner and I take on each other’s burdens every day, and for what she alleviates, I am grateful, and for what I alleviate she is grateful. It's as much as either of us can ask from each other. I love you in every way I could love you; as a friend, a sibling, a parent, a lover. In all its forms, I feel about you, some more than others, but pure and true nonetheless. The only way to know what you say is true, is to tell you the things about me none should ever know. As much as you'd probably like to prove your love, I don't think its worth the cost. I don't want to experience that twice.

For what it's worth, there's someone in the world who needs your promise more than me. I love you, and I'm ecstatic you love me, and I'll never stop caring about you. However, as much as I will continue to be a part of your life, I've already made the commitment to share my life with someone else. It's not like it isn't something we both didn't already know, but it's not something we've ever really talked about. Anyway, love you, and take care. (you can always bug me on my phone too.)

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Nailclippins Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
Hey! I really like your poems and your drawings! Nice work man! keep on rocking.
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courglas Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
Yeah, except I don't draw. But yeah, feel free to rip on this courglas.deviantart.com/art/Am… soundcloud: soundcloud.com/runninglyrics/a… -if you'd call it rock. :shrug:

I know he unblocked me long enough for you to reply about me being mad, but like I posted on your profile, it's already over man, and you were two late. Hell I don't even get on all the time (probably a couple of days in between every visit, just for an hour or two) and I was here for as short as it lasted.
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Nailclippins Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
Hey, I don't really know Calbvoorhees, I didn't talk to him before replying to you. I just popped in after a couple of days to see what was going on and then replied to your reply to me. So no, you don't know he unblocked you long enough for me to reply about anything.

Now, I read through all of the stuff i could get my hands on about your little internet melee, the discussion on Moni3's article, the blog post you linked on Calb's profile and the resulting argument there. 

I think there's something I missed, about a chatroom, but it seems to me that somewhere along the way, someone got angry about something.

Moni3 is one of the more chill, cool & collected people I have talked to. When you pop into the thread, for the first couple of posts, you come across as a besserwisser, you make your entry bluntly and state your opinions as fact. With most people, the civilized discussion ends there, because it is supremely annoying.
With Moni, you eventually mellow out, because Moni is a really cool person so you go on to have a really amiable and even interesting discussion.

If Moni's article had been made by me (which it wouldn't have, because Moni is way less ignorant about these matters than me) I would not have replied to you. 
Not because you didn't agree completely with me, which is fine, because I always leave the benefit of doubt in what I think, but because you would allready have given me the impression of not being moveable in your standpoint. If it was made by someone of a different temperament than me or Moni's it would probably have provoked annoyance or anger. You seem to react poorly to hostility, which is fine, but not if you really want to see where a discussion goes, where people really stand, or if they have anything interesting to say.

And so it spirals downwards, Your opinions of people is diminished, because of their hostility towards you, and vice versa.

you do have some really interesting points, I think the impression you give away is keeping you back. You apparently seem to be able to change your viewpoint in a civilized discussion though, and I respect that, but maybe you should work on getting into civlilized discussions in the first place. Show that will to change your opinions and you will have an easier time of moving others' thoughts.

-----end of me being frank and thinking I'm correct-----

While your stab at my stuff stung a bit, not gonna lie, i'm not going to try to find something to gripe about on your stuff. I goaded you while you were being angry, and it was fully deserved. All is fair in love and war etc etc.

But if you're going to accuse me of not getting lighting and shading, can you please link some pics and give some pointers. Even my friends who are really skilled have never mentioned my ineptitude with this even though they tend to give good constructive advice about shit i do. So don't leave me hanging with this incredibly shriveled flaccid dick & bloated blue balls when you say shit like this, i'll take specific & constructive criticism with grace. 
Hell, you can even link the pieces you think are really bad & shut up, it'd still be better than being uncertain about some guy on the internet being right about you being bad.

Stay chill, its good for your blood pressure. Laters
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courglas Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014
Nah, you're on the level, I was really just being an ass (mostly at cale) for not wanting to share his difference of opinion on Moni's article, which was how this started. He posted it rearing about how amazing it was, but at first glace (first read through) I didn't really care for it, and disagreed that it was the all amazing article that Cale said it was. He called me an ignorant idiot, based on one missing comma in my reply, and I proceeded to ask what his conclusion of Moni's article was, and he decided "I wasn't worth his time" so I posted that blog on his page with the very blatant "here you go jackass." and the rest ensues. When I posted, I wasn't looking for an intelligent conversation anymore, I was just goading him back for hiding behind the mods in the chat. (which he got me banned from the chat from our outside the chat conversation). As for the unblocking thing, if I go there now (and I have) I'm stilling blocked from responding to Cale, however whenever someone is blocked, that means no one (including you) can't reply to the blocked recipient. (This was included in an update to stop people from being able to keep responding to the blocked person, even though the blocked person could not respond, allowing for the blocked user to continually be harassed). I may never block anyone ever of all time on my own profile, but I've pissed off enough people to know thoroughly how it works. My guess would be, if you couldn't respond, you'd probably of asked Cale, and he either told you how it works, or pretended not to, unblocked me, told you "i' don't know what you're talking about" or "yes you can" and unblocked me long enough for you to reply, and then blocked me again. :shrug: mystery solved.

Your annalysis isn't half bad, pretty on the mark, but let me straighten a few things out. Now knowing the whole story, and how I was intentionally being an ass, it would reason for me to say, that my opionion of people is always the same. Sure, some of us are smart, but most of us are stupid. Even those of us that are smart, have the potential to act stupid, regardless of that. Cale, was being an ass, so instead of walking away, I decided to be an ass back, no hard feelings on my end at least. I'm one of the more chill, cool, collected, individulas as you phrase, however, I guarantee you that if you caught or provoked Moni the right way, it wouldn't have been any different. I've known people that never get into fights ever, but all you need is the right circumstance to make it happen. For me, :shrug: sometimes I just feel like fucking with people, but I don't like going out of my way to do it. I don't bother people unless they're being an ass, really, that's about it. I didn't even come into the chat looking for trouble, I simply expressed an opinion, and ass hat over there decided I was an ignorant idiot for grammar. Typically, if I wanted an interesting conversation (which I would have obliged to had Cale accepted), I'd go there first. I didn't make any future responses with that intention initially, and Moni proved to be as versed about art, if not more so, than I am. The only thing I feel bad about is being an ass, I think, initially to Moni, because that was the only moment I posted without thinking about too much, and I ended up changing my mind (about his article), which is why my second response was a lot less like how I hit up Cale, especially because of how Moni handled it. I personally think it's funny to have a shit throwing contest, (since back in the day people did that pretty often on here with no hard feelings) but the times have-a changed. I'm still on old school, stubborn assed deviant who doesn't really care who he pisses off one way or the other while I'm laughing on my side of the keyboard.

Long story short is that changing your opnions very easily just makes you wishy washy. Moni is not wishy washy, and neither am I. The fact the we both heavily stand in our own positions makes sure we let nothing slip by. If there are weaknesses in each others argument, we point them out. I"m still working on my reply to Moni as we speak, because it takes more time than simply replying to a combative message between users than an well thought out arguement.

That being said, I was being just as mean to anyone else who joined in, because it was a shit throwing contest, and I'm pretty decent at throwing shit around, so as for your work, there may be SOME truth to it, since I did glance at your work to make the remark, however if you really did want to some help, I know a few artists on here that can properly and thoroughly point you in the right direction. I'm not going to apologize though, since you made the choice to join in. I will however say, that if you decided to continue talking to me, feel free to always be frank, I like that better than being all flowery. We can even do an old fashioned art exchange, where I look at something of yours and critique it, and you look at something of mine and critique it. I'm stubborn, an ass, and very straight forward, and I have no problem stating my own flaws. Likewise, you probably wont find a more honest, sincere, or good person elsewhere. Speaking of which, since we are now disengaged, you do have some interesting concept art.
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WorldOfGabriel Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much. Gabriel
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