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If you were prepared…
Then why do you look, so scared…
Even though I know you don't have it in your soul to…

All, I ever was, was for you
And all I ever dreamed, was of you
And all I ever wanted, was you
And all I believed, was in you
Not anymore…

Either live the lie, or die for the truth
Either live the lie, or die for the truth
We would rather live!

I know I left the pack, but I'm back now
I know I left you to die, and I'm sorry
I know what I did was wrong, forgive me
But I'm here to save you all, to prove that I'm sorry, so sorry.

And if you really, didn't care, what are you still doing standing there?
And if you really don't have the time, then what are you still doing, wasting mine?
I've seen this world pass me by, seen many friends die, to this battlefield
After all, that I have seen, and still you won't listen to me, I digress…

I stuck around, and that didn't work
I helped you, and that didn't work
I did what I could, I did what I could.

All, I ever was, was for you
And all I ever dreamed, was of you
And all I ever wanted, was you
And all I believed, was in you
Not anymore…

And if you really, didn't care, what are you still doing standing there?
And if you really don't have the time, what are you still doing, wasting mine?

My sister my brother, my father my mother,
I've seen them suffer on this battlefield!
My wife my lover, my son my daughter,
Don't need to grow up in this kind of a world!

After all, that I've tried to be, and still you won't follow me
Where does it end?

Lay down, and, die!?!

No, way!
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Completed 2006 © To Lucas G. Moreno

If you want to hear my horrible recording of the song, let me know, and I'll figure out a way to send you the mp3. I suppose you may then properly comment on this journal. :shrug: The recording however does not have the last two lines sung as they are written here. This was a last minute update that I felt like incorporating that to much my liking I will keep.

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Kuro Kiatsu Kiotori
United States
Current Residence: The Northern Walk
Favourite genre of music: Anything that has a style and at least some class.
Favourite photographer: Lighteh
Favourite style of art: Hand drawings
Wallpaper of choice: Seasonscape
Favourite cartoon character: Tails Miles Prower
Personal Quote: "What then, when there is not reason to reason with?" ~Rhythan
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:icontetrarchangel:
=tetrarchangel Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My thanks for the favourite.
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:iconcourglas:
No, thank you for spending the time to do what you do. I'll admit I having had the chance to explore then entire thing just yet, but that is also why I faved it, so I could go back to it later. The format intrigues me, and I imagine this took some work. Anyway, nice work.
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:icontetrarchangel:
=tetrarchangel May 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's a pleasure, most of the time, to devote time to it. And there's tons more in the gallery, some more experimental structurally than others, if you do ever get the time.
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~Saskelover1234 Aug 23, 2012  Student Writer
sup?
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:iconcourglas:
Y'know, the usual. Busy doing nothing and being a sucker for sad hearts and the such. Writing about it and forgetting how much people don't listen because most of them don't really care. Same old same old, in with the new, out with the old, and I'm clinging on to old traditions that'd be better off kept alive.
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~Saskelover1234 Aug 24, 2012  Student Writer
That sounds more negative than it should be haha. Hope you're okay.
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~horrorshock Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
hey, i was wondering if u could look through my writings and tell me what u thought? (eh dont look at the yaoi though lol its the story with the x between the names.)
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:iconcourglas:
Only if what I may think you can handle.
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~horrorshock Dec 5, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
You have commented on one of my stories before...
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:iconcourglas:
True, but I do have a tendency to offend with my criticalness. Plus, when asked for an honest opinion of what I think, I do nothing less of it. I do not hold bias, I do not hold back, I do not lie, I do not beat around the bush, and I do not give anything less than my thoughts as precise as I can describe them.

I'm not trying to dissuade you for asking this of me, I am simply asking that you acknowledge that I have warned you that from my own past experiences, that a lot of the time, people do not want to hear the uncandycoated truth. I Simply tell you this as a courtesy. I will otherwise gladly, and surely oblige with my full 100% while I read and give my thoughts.
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